Monday, November 23, 2009

Deep Within

A fellow blogger & friend, was feeling fearful of posting a poem of hers....so I told her I will post one of mine as well in the hope it gives her courage :) I hope you do my dear I am sure its a wonderful one!

This poem was written in 2002 for my present husband :)

I'd like to reach for you
Feel you close to me
Your hands caressing
Soothing away all pain

I'd like to hold you
Hug you close to me
Tender kisses on my lips
Soft looks searching me deep

Wish to let you in my heart
Control my thoughts day 'n' night
Still something within resists
Fear keeps me rooted still

I search the sky deep 'n' dark
Seeking answers I can not find
Hoping something will arise
That will clear my troubled mind



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6 comments:

Amity Me said...

Wow Melissa, this is such a sweet poem for your hubby!

when we are inspired, we really write beautiful lines, out from an inspired heart, comes poetic lines and verses!

awesome poem and full of love Melissa!

Leo said...

a really wonderful poem filled with love! :)

Magaly Guerrero said...

Well now that Melissa has pulled my punk card, I better go and read my crappy poem one more time before posting it.

I just wish your poem had been mildly bad--you could have pretended you know? Now I'm really terrify of posting mine, but you know what? Someone told me that life is all about embracing our fears, so I'm on my way to squeezing my poetic fear until it pops!

Magaly Guerrero said...

Oh my! I actually did it! I feel so brave, even if I really want to go back and press the delete button--not by accident this time :)

On other news, I just noticed that I wasn't following your blog. I can't recall stopping. That is very weird... but I'm fixed my mistake and I'm following again.

Marie said...

I like it. <--that seems such a mundane comment but I really do like it and I just don't have the words. Should I say it's poetic? :)

Yaya said...

Beautiful.



And thank you for posting our adoption button!!!!!

Monday, November 23, 2009

Deep Within

A fellow blogger & friend, was feeling fearful of posting a poem of hers....so I told her I will post one of mine as well in the hope it gives her courage :) I hope you do my dear I am sure its a wonderful one!

This poem was written in 2002 for my present husband :)

I'd like to reach for you
Feel you close to me
Your hands caressing
Soothing away all pain

I'd like to hold you
Hug you close to me
Tender kisses on my lips
Soft looks searching me deep

Wish to let you in my heart
Control my thoughts day 'n' night
Still something within resists
Fear keeps me rooted still

I search the sky deep 'n' dark
Seeking answers I can not find
Hoping something will arise
That will clear my troubled mind



MyFreeCopyright.com Registered & Protected

6 comments:

Amity Me said...

Wow Melissa, this is such a sweet poem for your hubby!

when we are inspired, we really write beautiful lines, out from an inspired heart, comes poetic lines and verses!

awesome poem and full of love Melissa!

Leo said...

a really wonderful poem filled with love! :)

Magaly Guerrero said...

Well now that Melissa has pulled my punk card, I better go and read my crappy poem one more time before posting it.

I just wish your poem had been mildly bad--you could have pretended you know? Now I'm really terrify of posting mine, but you know what? Someone told me that life is all about embracing our fears, so I'm on my way to squeezing my poetic fear until it pops!

Magaly Guerrero said...

Oh my! I actually did it! I feel so brave, even if I really want to go back and press the delete button--not by accident this time :)

On other news, I just noticed that I wasn't following your blog. I can't recall stopping. That is very weird... but I'm fixed my mistake and I'm following again.

Marie said...

I like it. <--that seems such a mundane comment but I really do like it and I just don't have the words. Should I say it's poetic? :)

Yaya said...

Beautiful.



And thank you for posting our adoption button!!!!!